It was a dark and not so stormy night I was playing spiderman as Vernon had bought me it earlier that day, Justine was playing with her toys and Alli was editing photos, this was the friday of the accident, a normal friday. The door bell rang Alli and I went to the door to welcome Vernon. But a police lady was standing at the door she asked if Chris Adams lived there we said no and she asked who the blue vespa belonged to, then Alli asked if there was an accident “yes” 
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That is definitely the most haunting short story I’ve read. There’s nothing to add or take away that would make it more powerful. I’d just like to change the ending to “No.”
Yes indeed. Did you make that Yes?
no
well said
i know
-The Maki
get your own comment.
– The Cad (a.k.a. lord of the waiting room)
yes sir!!!
now look what you started.
-chris
Get your own comment
-The Maki (Lord of the comments)
ha, well played.
-chris
Maki, Great Post, thank you for sharing! You are clearly a talented intelligent young man. Prayers continuing to go out for all of the family.
thank you for sharing. prayers continue. more art please 🙂
Don’t stop, Maki.
big hugs to you “the maki” xx (good job i`m not there cause i know how much you hate auntie hugs!!!)xx aaron and lewis say hi!! xx
ps did allison tell you i sent a card for you to your old address?? what am i like??
Looking forward to part two, through your eyes Maki!
Wow Maki, your painting is very powerful. I’m looking forward to your posts!
Love all of this awesome art work and Maki! You’re instinctual ability to paint pictures with words too is inspiring sir. Please continue for us.
How very well you express yourself, Maki! Both in words and painting – so sad and powerful. Lots and lots of love and terrible auntie hugs 🙂
Maki….you rock. You are an amazing young man! So much talent!